Diary Tips

i am writing about my best mate dieing infront of me, can somonee please help me make it sound a bit saucyer if u no what i mean like make you crindge what type of aeroplanes and stuff bombs ect, how many people dieing you no?

i’m making a scary story about kids who get trapped in a haunted house…
how do i make the diary entries of one of the kids still sound good.

(the whole story is the diary entries)

I need to schedule appointments according to diary time entered for specific people